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I had to cut Act II into parts. Hope you dont mind~
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[11/19/2012]
Wow, im on a roll with these updates, huh?
Well, lets start by saying i was trying to pay attention where Rose was explaining things, but i got lost in the middle and decided just to pretend to listen. XD
amg, mysterious guy in hood :U *GASP* HES TALKING TO JOHN I THINK AKJHJKSF
amg, there are 4 screens in his secret lab or something. does that mean 3 more people~? im guessing so~ ; 7 ; very mysterious~
aha, i laughed so hard and so many times at "TG"s raps and stuff XD definitely cant wait until he gets introduced~
so basically.. John gets transferred into a different dimension, so hes safe ; u ;
lmao, the sprite to me looks very unattractive now.
aaahh, there is black stuff everywhereee~ what does it mean? ; A ;
aaaahh, so intense~ Rose's battery is low and--
OMG DID THAT JUST HAPPEN
bro, i said "FUCK FUCK FUCK" so loud when Rose's connection dropped. i was freaking out so much aaaahhh ; A ;
this is so intense i cant-- WHAT WILL HAPPEN?! ; O ;
Act II, Part II is next..!
lol, screw that, lets odd on, shall we~?
amg, im in love withInsufferable Prick Dave Strider. TT u TT
so, he's ironic and 'cool', which i totally agree XD so basically.. hes a hispter..? XD
but his friggen sylladex is so complicated i just-- //brain explodes
he's a blade kind~ pretty cool~ c:
so now, i guess you can change your weapon, i think. idk, thats confusing ; u ;
amg, i cried laughing at the bird ajkhsgkh
Rose's sylladex is so.. inconvenient ; 7 ;
all the details pertaining the history and relationships with side characters and stuff is pretty cool~ im having a blast listening and watching Homestuck defiantly better than reading hours on end XD <3
Rose's mother apparently has a drinking thing and 'likes' wizards. shes pretty dedicated to passive aggression XD and so is Rose. and Rose also likes embroidery im guessing~
im so excited to see who "GG" is~ the voice in the series is so kyute~ <3 she seems like a great character~
gah, John's dad got kidnapped ~ still doesnt explain the black gooey stu-- AMGTHERESAMONSTERLOOKOUT ; O ;
aaaand more explanations about the world John's in. from his.. deceased.. grandma..? .___.
from what i know, there is a light and dark war or something, but im not sure if John's contributed to both sides. .___.;;
aha, i have no real opinions or observations, but a ton of reactions~ im trying to observe as much as possible and write down and much info i can so i can refer back to it later to go "OH, I GEDDIT! :'D"
haha, the side jokes are really funny~ overall, the whole dialogue is pretty hilarious~
aha, probably gonna add more later, we'll see~ until than:
Act II, Part II is next~!
===============================================
[11/19/2012]
Wow, im on a roll with these updates, huh?
Well, lets start by saying i was trying to pay attention where Rose was explaining things, but i got lost in the middle and decided just to pretend to listen. XD
amg, mysterious guy in hood :U *GASP* HES TALKING TO JOHN I THINK AKJHJKSF
amg, there are 4 screens in his secret lab or something. does that mean 3 more people~? im guessing so~ ; 7 ; very mysterious~
aha, i laughed so hard and so many times at "TG"s raps and stuff XD definitely cant wait until he gets introduced~
so basically.. John gets transferred into a different dimension, so hes safe ; u ;
lmao, the sprite to me looks very unattractive now.
aaahh, there is black stuff everywhereee~ what does it mean? ; A ;
aaaahh, so intense~ Rose's battery is low and--
OMG DID THAT JUST HAPPEN
bro, i said "FUCK FUCK FUCK" so loud when Rose's connection dropped. i was freaking out so much aaaahhh ; A ;
this is so intense i cant-- WHAT WILL HAPPEN?! ; O ;
lol, screw that, lets odd on, shall we~?
amg, im in love with
so, he's ironic and 'cool', which i totally agree XD so basically.. hes a hispter..? XD
but his friggen sylladex is so complicated i just-- //brain explodes
he's a blade kind~ pretty cool~ c:
so now, i guess you can change your weapon, i think. idk, thats confusing ; u ;
amg, i cried laughing at the bird ajkhsgkh
Rose's sylladex is so.. inconvenient ; 7 ;
all the details pertaining the history and relationships with side characters and stuff is pretty cool~ im having a blast listening and watching Homestuck defiantly better than reading hours on end XD <3
Rose's mother apparently has a drinking thing and 'likes' wizards. shes pretty dedicated to passive aggression XD and so is Rose. and Rose also likes embroidery im guessing~
im so excited to see who "GG" is~ the voice in the series is so kyute~ <3 she seems like a great character~
gah, John's dad got kidnapped ~ still doesnt explain the black gooey stu-- AMGTHERESAMONSTERLOOKOUT ; O ;
aaaand more explanations about the world John's in. from his.. deceased.. grandma..? .___.
from what i know, there is a light and dark war or something, but im not sure if John's contributed to both sides. .___.;;
aha, i have no real opinions or observations, but a ton of reactions~ im trying to observe as much as possible and write down and much info i can so i can refer back to it later to go "OH, I GEDDIT! :'D"
haha, the side jokes are really funny~ overall, the whole dialogue is pretty hilarious~
aha, probably gonna add more later, we'll see~ until than:
Act II, Part II is next~!
aha~ these updates are just snippits at a time now~ 'cause creating a big text file is tl'dr. TT u TT /
hope you guiz dont mind~
plus i had to let it all out before continuing..~ i can see how people are hooked, but so far to this Hetalian, i still see it as just another interesting story so far..~
next up:
Act II, Part II <3
//edit: updated~ didnt like how short it was~ <3
Other Acts:
Prologue: [link]
Act I: [link]
Act II: [part 1] You are here! [part 2] [link]
Act III: [link]
Act IV: [part 1] [link] [part 2] coming soon..!
hope you guiz dont mind~
plus i had to let it all out before continuing..~ i can see how people are hooked, but so far to this Hetalian, i still see it as just another interesting story so far..~
next up:
Act II, Part II <3
//edit: updated~ didnt like how short it was~ <3
Other Acts:
Prologue: [link]
Act I: [link]
Act II: [part 1] You are here! [part 2] [link]
Act III: [link]
Act IV: [part 1] [link] [part 2] coming soon..!
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